From “Actual Comments Overheard in a Poetry Workshop,” by Steve Caldes:
Comments on the poem, â€œThe Sprint: A Songâ€
â€œThis poem read like it was written by someone who doesnâ€™t speak the language is actually speaking the language. That is a compliment. It really, truly feels
that you have invented a language that already exists and are unsuccessfully teaching it to people who already know it.”
“Recent Rejection Letters from the Eyeshot Outbox, Volume Five,” by Eyeshot Editor Lee Klein.